I wanted to make
something beautiful…
avatar of dragon bone
Celtic sworl-painted warrior
adorned with cold starlight stare
of purest water
out of night sword bare
statuesque goddess of Greek proportion
portrait of love so vast
blooming roses painful, profane
I wanted to touch
something beautiful
fumbling naked fingers
unworthy buckling
harness to steed that
should never be
mounted
As free as thought upon
the canvas of naiveté
and youth
I wanted to see
something beautiful
majestic Merlin opus of majic
mellifluous articulation
of perfect runic song
echoing in the chambers
of every beating heart
thrumming in time to the pulse
of the multiverse
all of creation
in one microsecond
all-consuming
connoting
continuing
every conscious
tattooed with the internal
resonance….
of you.
Something beautiful,
which we all eternally seek.
Something beautiful….
You
I find this oddly. . . distracting. . . Olde Punk. Something about “fumbling naked fingers” and “unworthy buckling harness to steed that should never be mounted.” I suspect your female readers may all be blushing this afternoon! Lovely writing, just a little hard to get refocused on my work. . .
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😛
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I guess I’m feeling “randy, baby!”
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OMG– you did NOT just go there!
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Way to kill the beautiful spell you wove!
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lol, yeah I’m really good at that. That’s why I should write more and speak less
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Though I guess it would be a good defense if you wanted to avoid me suggesting that we write collaboratively, isn’t it?!
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are you kidding? We need to do that!!
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Depends– is your inner 15 year old boy doing the writing?!
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lmao
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Reblogged this on Brave and Reckless and commented:
Something beautiful– and more than a little erotic– from Olde Punk.
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“a perfect runic song” is where i grinned.
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😎
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This poem is…dare I say it? beautiful! Thank you for your interest in my blog. I look forward to following yours.
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Thank you! I really appreciate it!
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WoW!!! i know i am repetitive……..i loved it!!! 🙂 🙂
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lol, I feel that way too when I comment
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hehe…..thank god i am not the only one! 😀
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One microsecond! She deserves more. I’m kidding. This was beautiful, Oldepunk!
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Thanks Ward, I really appreciate it!
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You’re welcome.
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Thanks Ward
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Reblogged this on Secret First Draft: A Site of the Sudden Denouement Literary Collective and commented:
OldePunk/RamJet Poetry
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“mellifluous articulation” – fantastic!
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Thank you 🙏
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Wow, OP! Knocked it out of the park this morning! Love this!
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Thanks Eric 🙏🍻
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thank you very much
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